Year 12 Textual Analysis: The representation of Gender in Doctor Who

Read the two essay responses very carefully. Answer the following questions:
1. Compare and contrast the two introductions. Which one do you think is more effective? Why?
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2. Look at how each candidate uses PEE. Identify the strongest section of analysis in each section. Why is it effective?
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3. Identify a weak section of analysis. How can it be improved? Redraft the PEE chain you have chosen making the necessary improvements.
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4. Mark the essay overall according to the assessment criteria

Explanation – analysis & argument /20
Evidence - Use of examples /20
Use of terminology
(Including accuracy and spelling) /10

Total………………………………………… /50

5. Give the essay 2 stars and 2 wishes.







6. Compare and contrast the two conclusions. Top tip – Conclusions MUST relate to the representation. You could end it by summarising which technical code emerges as the most powerful and why. You should have commented on this in the main body of your essay.
Which conclusion is more effective and why?
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